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Oh, my sweet delectable seasonal treat,
How good you are to me in those frosty, chilled times of the year
With your color dark with the cocoa of your being,
And your clothes a glistening milk white against the pale peach of my skin.

Delightfully, I savor your warmth and take it into myself,
Heating my cold surface against yours
And allowing us to fight the cool air together
For just a bit longer than we would apart.

A faint breath reveals your sweet scent,
Which stirs a monstrous craving within me.
A craving that drives me with the desire to take you into myself
And consume you whole.

With a gentle touch, I taste of your richness
And savoring your extreme warmth upon my tongue,
Letting it swirl and excite my desire for more with
The intoxication of your sweetness.

Curled up in the deep winter night,
Within my cocoon of wool and cotton,
I stay comfortably warm with you,
My cherished hot chocolate.
©2006-2009 *DreamingExperience
:icondreamingexperience:

Author's Comments

One of my "failed" entries in the same contest my other poem "My Future" got Honorable Mention.

This piece, as previewed by some friends before I entered it, seems to touch the more erotic parts of the human brain. XD But don't let your hormones fool you people, it's just about a food.

Category #6
Subject - open as long as it appeals to all five senses

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:icontk-chan:
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*must eventually steal this for an original comic that it would suit terribly well*

I love androgyny (in humans and poems, apparently)
Eeheehee.
Vague, would probably be the correct word. *mistook this for erotica at first, as well*

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THE SQUiD PRiNCE IS HEEEEEEEEEREEEEEE.
:icondreamingexperience:
XD I know.

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My Id and Superego take the forms of Megatron and Optimus Prime.
:iconsaintslove:
WOW! SOunds good to me, great poem and excellent flow.
:iconendth:
I liked it alot, at first i thought you were talking about hot cocoa [ which you were ] but for a brief moment i thought maybe you were talking about smoking something ... sorry, but there are a few parts that "could" reference to smoking of some kind!
:icondreamingexperience:
XD You're the first to say something other than sex with a black partner.

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My Id and Superego take the forms of Megatron and Optimus Prime.

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